Poems

We were assigned a space and told to move,
standard quarters, designated by a type.
Sorted neatly by the count of their rooms,
and the precise curtilage enclosing them.

 

They are meted out to individuals,
never by the number of souls in a family,
but strictly by rank, by status, by score.
I do not know who divided our lives in half.

 

A mid-level officer with adolescent children,
with ageing parents under his roof,
with relatives visiting season after season,
is crammed into a quarter of fewer rooms.

 

While an officer at the peak of the hierarchy,
whose parents have long since passed,
whose children have grown and scattered,
who has no kin left to cross his threshold,
inherits a bungalow that only echoes.

 

What do you call this machine,
that denies substance to those in need?
Hoarding space for the heavily decorated,

inherited rules or a heartless algorithm?

 

 

If it is measured in square feet,

but not care how many live in it without losing their dignity,

They would be calling it protocol; you call it entitlement,

I call it a house that forgot how to be a home.

 

~

Jay Jagdev


Samir Ranjan Mohapatra
How true! I can perfectly relate to my own case. I was allotted a senior officer’s bungalow when my children and one of parents weren’t there.I never got one when I needed it. Nice depiction in your poem.

Lopamudra Mishra
I could feel the sentiments behind each syllable as I live with such memories. Living in quarter and then leaving behind it used to be a heart breaking experience. Well narrated.

Suresh Kumar Mishra
I was content in staying in rented accomodation except for a year in 92-93. Barely, could I settle when I was transferred to Baripada. I move to Baripada on 1st. March 93 and my family started back in government quarter. A penal rent bill at market rate was slapped on me. Since, transfer was in the middle of academic session, on my representation, the penal rent was stayed. Getting a government accomodation was difficult by personal request before the estate officer and that too, not to your liking condition wise and area wise.

Jhumpaa Mitra Ray
I cldnt relate to the sentiments much...as in my high school days till +2 I used to stay wd my Uncle at ISO 4...Cantonment rd ...katak...as my Uncle was elevated in 1982 n got thz bunglow allotted to him...huge rooms ..massive garden...pets...servants quarters etc...but whn I read thz out to my husband...Biju instantly agreed...as my father in law...biju`s bada mamu were BDO n Tahsildar...Biju n his friends spent their lives in these "type" quarters...

R Sunanda Chowdhury
Surprisingly I could relate completely with your poem as we used to stay a small MES quarter occupied by a big family of 8 persons in camp 2, AFS Kalailumda throughout my schooling since my birth. Because ofy father`s generous nature and my mother`s simplicity guests always preferred to stay with us inspite of my uncle`s home nearby. My friends staying in air force multi room quarters with small families used to question me how we could manage to study, accommodate guests in our home. But my industrious and benevolent father had made a big garden better to be called as nandan van and had grown varieties of fruits, vegetables, flowers, crotons, herbs etc which not only helped in providing fruits n vegetables, flowers but was a park for colony childrens, home to many birds, and extension of our home for me to study in daytime. Thanks for writing such poetries sir. It`s really so fresh yet makes you nostalgic.

R Sunanda Chowdhury
Surprisingly I could relate completely with your poem as we used to stay a small MES quarter occupied by a big family of 8 persons in camp 2, AFS Kalailumda throughout my schooling since my birth. Because ofy father`s generous nature and my mother`s simplicity guests always preferred to stay with us inspite of my uncle`s home nearby. My friends staying in air force multi room quarters with small families used to question me how we could manage to study, accommodate guests in our home. But my industrious and benevolent father had made a big garden better to be called as nandan van and had grown varieties of fruits, vegetables, flowers, crotons, herbs etc which not only helped in providing fruits n vegetables, flowers but was a park for colony childrens, home to many birds, and extension of our home for me to study in daytime. Thanks for writing such poetries sir. It`s really so fresh yet makes you nostalgic.

Mrutyunjay Sarangi
Same with salary also. When you need lots of money to meet the education expenses of children and feed their ever-hungry mouths you get a pittance. By the time you reach the Apex scale the children have left for their job and your need is much reduced.

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